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Glad to hear that you (and the dog) wasn't physically harmed and that your stuff wasn't damage, but I understand that the whole thing was quite unsettling. Making a piece of music from the event seems like a good way to process what happened.
I hope everything settles down soon.

CIEIRMusic responds:

So far things are Ok. Before, the people on the 5th floor had to be sequestered into Hotels until it was deemed safe to go back, the rest of us, where the fire didn't hit were already allowed to return. Just recently I spoke to a neighbor of mine whom happened to be the one that allowed entry to the man that escaped the fire on the balcony. Poor bastard was covered in soot, in shock and as it turned out the whole thing he did was fight or flight because he literally woke up to his room being on fire.

Nice, very fitting, piece.
Sorry to hear about Dexey. Always hard to lose a dog.

kadepow11 responds:

Thank you.

Nice setup for a mysterie

CIEIRMusic responds:

Thanks.

Recent Art Reviews

6 Art Reviews

Very nice.
You seem to have a good understanding of story-telling using the comic book media. This really don't look like someone doing their very first comic.
A nice consistent art style.

One small nitpick.
The reading order for the six last panels can be unclear. Should you go right or down from the first of these panels? Down seems to make most sense from content, but having to think about it can break the reading rhythm.

The last panel works very well as a cliffhanger. I really want to turn the page and see what happens next. Good story telling technique.

Looking forward to see the coming pages.

e-lee-za responds:

Thank you! The feedback is much appreciated :D

Turned out very nicely. I hope this has picked your spirits up (pun intended).

Nice drawings. Good layout. Nice readable font...

but the lettering is inconsistent in size and a lot of it is so small it is really hard to read. That, in combination with it being in German- which I can understand to some level, but far from fully- means that I've probably not fully understood the story, as I've not read all the text.

Still all in all, very nice.

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