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Nice drawings. Good layout. Nice readable font...

but the lettering is inconsistent in size and a lot of it is so small it is really hard to read. That, in combination with it being in German- which I can understand to some level, but far from fully- means that I've probably not fully understood the story, as I've not read all the text.

Still all in all, very nice.

Very nice.
But you really should edit the thumbnail. You will get more viewers that way. :)

Small tip on walk cycles; if you make the upper body and head move up a bit in the middle frame (the one where the supporting leg is straight under the body) you will get a stronger feeling of the character walking.
https://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/4809cfffeef86a4e8930549c46df6298

AndresFlores responds:

thx for the advice buddy

That is really very good. A lot of Neal Adams influence, I think. Is this from a published comic? It aught to be.

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