PerKGrok's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[An Illusion To My Eye - Page 1]

Very nice.
You seem to have a good understanding of story-telling using the comic book media. This really don't look like someone doing their very first comic.
A nice consistent art style.

One small nitpick.
The reading order for the six last panels can be unclear. Should you go right or down from the first of these panels? Down seems to make most sense from content, but having to think about it can break the reading rhythm.

The last panel works very well as a cliffhanger. I really want to turn the page and see what happens next. Good story telling technique.

Looking forward to see the coming pages.

e-lee-za responds:

Thank you! The feedback is much appreciated :D

[Christmas Ghosts - Impromptu Art Collab]

Turned out very nicely. I hope this has picked your spirits up (pun intended).

[Nextworld Page 1-9]

Nice drawings. Good layout. Nice readable font...

but the lettering is inconsistent in size and a lot of it is so small it is really hard to read. That, in combination with it being in German- which I can understand to some level, but far from fully- means that I've probably not fully understood the story, as I've not read all the text.

Still all in all, very nice.

[😳 bark bark]

Very nice.
But you really should edit the thumbnail. You will get more viewers that way. :)

[peter walking]

Small tip on walk cycles; if you make the upper body and head move up a bit in the middle frame (the one where the supporting leg is straight under the body) you will get a stronger feeling of the character walking.
https://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/4809cfffeef86a4e8930549c46df6298

AndresFlores responds:

thx for the advice buddy

[Comic page]

That is really very good. A lot of Neal Adams influence, I think. Is this from a published comic? It aught to be.