An Illusion To My Eye - Page 1 Very nice.
You seem to have a good understanding of story-telling using the comic book media. This really don't look like someone doing their very first comic.
A nice consistent art style.
One small nitpick.
The reading order for the six last panels can be unclear. Should you go right or down from the first of these panels? Down seems to make most sense from content, but having to think about it can break the reading rhythm.
The last panel works very well as a cliffhanger. I really want to turn the page and see what happens next. Good story telling technique.
Looking forward to see the coming pages.
peter walking 
